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07-22-2005, 06:34 PM
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117 That Little Whisper
That Little Whisper
Vaughn Rickar's second-challenge-leap in his quest for the right to replace Zo? Malvison as Chief Leaper for Lothos continues. Will he complete it within the time limit set by Lothos? Just take a moment and let the creators know what you thought of this episode. If you'd like to leave a comment, please do so! We appreciate constructive criticism. The Quantum Retribution Team
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Junior Leaper
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The second leap was also good, although I think that Vaugh is a bit more heartless at the job, at least from what he was thinking during the entire leap. Great job, and I can't wait to read about the third test.
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