Welcome to the Messageboard

Moderated by: MJ Cogburn

   

 

To a precious few, it was a paradise; a haven from the hectic pace of the real world....

To others it was a nightmare.... Nothing on this quaint island is what it seems....

 

Once you enter... you may not escape....


Go Back   Al's Place Quantum Leap Online Community >
Fan Fiction & Creations Forums
> Quantum Retribution > Rankings > Season One

View Poll Results: What is your opinion of this story?
Excellent! Can't wait for the next one! 1 20.00%
Nicely done. What's up for next week? 4 80.00%
It was okay. 0 0%
What the... huh? 0 0%
Voters: 5. You may not vote on this poll

Reply
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread
Old 07-22-2005, 06:00 PM   #1
QL Damsel
Al's Place / TVS Administrator
 
QL Damsel's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2002
Location: Near Austin Texas
Posts: 2,530
Post 101 Nightmare's Conception

Nightmare's Conception


Nathaniel Lothoman brings Alia into the new complex that he has built, telling her about the awesome power of a super-computer that he has made. It?s during this time that Zo? and Thames help him into the computer itself. The computer merges with Nathaniel, thus creating the bio-computer: Lothos. Little did they realize that they had created a monster.


(*Written by: M. J. Cogburn & A. J. Burfield)


Just take a moment and let the creators know what you thought of this introduction to this new series.

We appreciate constructive criticism.

The Quantum Retribution Team
__________________

Last edited by Dman176; 08-15-2005 at 03:23 PM. Reason: Adding story links
QL Damsel is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-22-2005, 06:02 PM   #2
QL Damsel
Al's Place / TVS Administrator
 
QL Damsel's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2002
Location: Near Austin Texas
Posts: 2,530
Default Re: 101 Nightmare's Conception

MikeKraken wrote:

Well, I read this originally when I read "Fallen Hero" on QL:TVS so long ago... it was a nice refresher and an interesting way to introduce the series. I'm hoping that I can catch up here soon!

Great work, MJ and AJ. I ranked this one option #2.

... Mike. ^_^


---
"Well, you know what they say: it's never too soon to start early."
~ Sam Beckett, 'Running for Honour', "Quantum Leap" ~
__________________

Last edited by Dman176; 08-15-2005 at 01:09 PM.
QL Damsel is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 05-27-2009, 08:56 PM   #3
ohboy
Junior Leaper
 
ohboy's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2008
Location: Northern California
Posts: 1,383
Default

I've been trying to read no more than 1 episode of "Virtual Seasons" a day, in order to spread it out so that I would make it last longer, so I decided to start reading "Quantum Retribution" as well.

Anyways, this was an interesting first episode for the series. A lot of contrasts between Project Quantum Leap with Al and Sam, and I think that it worked well for this series. It's also nice to see how it started from the perspective of the Evil Leapers, and how their project took off. I'm looking forward to reading more.
__________________
"Do not forget to entertain strangers, for by doing some have unwittingly entertained angels."
Dr. Wily is a registered trademark of Capcom, and I don't own the rights to it in anyway, nor do I profit from the avatar.
ohboy is offline   Reply With Quote
Reply
Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search

Forum Jump


All times are GMT -4. The time now is 10:59 AM.


Contact the Community Administrator  |  Visit The Quantum Retribution Website


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.7.1
Copyright ©2000 - 2023, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
Copyright 2000 - 2023 Al's Place Quantum Leap Fan Site | 4.8.15.16.23.42