Rhyme With the Line Above

Sam's Crow · 09-01-2008, 05:24 AM

Sort of like a poetry game that I came across on another forum. Except this one is Quantum Leap based. I person has to post at least two lines a go, and the next person has to make their first line ryhme with the last line of the previous person.

I'm terrible at starting so anyone, feel free.

ohboy · 09-01-2008, 10:56 AM

Sam leapt into a very large room,
he was an old man with a large beard.

Yeah, it's not great, but I've never been good at poetry.

Sam's Crow · 09-01-2008, 11:33 AM

Standing infront of a mirror he heard,
The sound of laughter coming from an infant.
The atmosphere was hardly one of sadness and sorrow,

ohboy · 09-03-2008, 11:04 AM

Sam looked out the window, it was almost tomorrow,
Sam looked at the clock it was 11:43

Sam's Crow · 09-03-2008, 11:14 AM

So far it looks like another RR that is going to be owned by you and I, ohboy. Unless other people join in of course.

By the way, what the hell rhymes with 11:43?!

ohboy · 09-03-2008, 12:00 PM

I think that with time, you only have to rhyme with the last number. So I think you would only have to rhyme with "3". If you want me to change that last verse, though, I will.

Deelicious · 09-05-2008, 10:38 PM

He reached down a hand to scratch his knee
Instead of flesh, there was only air

MO · 09-07-2008, 05:30 AM

He looked at his leg and there was nothing there.
He remembered reading about "phantom nerves."

ohboy · 09-09-2008, 06:52 PM

"Oh no," said Sam. "This is not what I deserve!"
"Al!" Sam cried. "Where are you?"

Jaycol · 09-12-2008, 08:02 AM

"Right here Sam" said Al "I wonder that too"
"Let me check with Ziggy, be back in a flash."

Sam's Crow · 09-12-2008, 12:30 PM

As Sam stood and waited, he heard a crash.
He looked to see what it was and got a shock,
There was a young bloodied woman at the bottom of the stairs.

Jaycol · 09-12-2008, 01:06 PM

"My god it looks like she's been mauled by bears
What can I do to get down to there.
When my legs are nothing but air."

O.K. One to many rhymes but that is what I came up with.

ohboy · 09-13-2008, 08:27 PM

No, it sounded fun Jaycol. Like a violent Dr. Suess story.

"Ohboy, that gave me quite a scare
After what I saw down there."
As Sam finished he could hear the baby laugh,
Laugh like nothing in the world could go wrong.

Errowyn · 09-14-2008, 01:04 PM

Can I join in? I've never tried a round robin like this before and am eager to try it out. My appologies if I mess anything up.

It was as if the baby's heart was one big song.
"How do I get down there?" Sam asked, "I need some luck."

ohboy · 09-14-2008, 06:03 PM

I'm not the creator of this thread, but I don't think that you messed up. By the way, you are always welcome to post on "Round Robin A" as well, in case you feel like it.

Sorry for the cheap use of advertising on your thread, Crow...

MO · 10-06-2017, 12:06 AM

"Because right now I'm kinda stuck.
That young lady needs my aid,"

09-01-2008, 05:24 AM	#1
Sam's Crow Assistant to Gooshie Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Liverpool, England Posts: 488	Rhyme With the Line Above Sort of like a poetry game that I came across on another forum. Except this one is Quantum Leap based. I person has to post at least two lines a go, and the next person has to make their first line ryhme with the last line of the previous person. I'm terrible at starting so anyone, feel free. __________________ It's Monday morning again, Or still? It's hard to tell the difference.

09-01-2008, 10:56 AM	#2
ohboy Junior Leaper Join Date: May 2008 Location: Northern California Posts: 1,383	Sam leapt into a very large room, he was an old man with a large beard. Yeah, it's not great, but I've never been good at poetry. __________________ "Do not forget to entertain strangers, for by doing some have unwittingly entertained angels." Dr. Wily is a registered trademark of Capcom, and I don't own the rights to it in anyway, nor do I profit from the avatar.

09-01-2008, 11:33 AM	#3
Sam's Crow Assistant to Gooshie Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Liverpool, England Posts: 488	Standing infront of a mirror he heard, The sound of laughter coming from an infant. The atmosphere was hardly one of sadness and sorrow, __________________ It's Monday morning again, Or still? It's hard to tell the difference.

09-03-2008, 11:04 AM	#4
ohboy Junior Leaper Join Date: May 2008 Location: Northern California Posts: 1,383	Sam looked out the window, it was almost tomorrow, Sam looked at the clock it was 11:43 __________________ "Do not forget to entertain strangers, for by doing some have unwittingly entertained angels." Dr. Wily is a registered trademark of Capcom, and I don't own the rights to it in anyway, nor do I profit from the avatar.

09-03-2008, 11:14 AM	#5
Sam's Crow Assistant to Gooshie Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Liverpool, England Posts: 488	So far it looks like another RR that is going to be owned by you and I, ohboy. Unless other people join in of course. By the way, what the hell rhymes with 11:43?! __________________ It's Monday morning again, Or still? It's hard to tell the difference.

09-03-2008, 12:00 PM	#6
ohboy Junior Leaper Join Date: May 2008 Location: Northern California Posts: 1,383	I think that with time, you only have to rhyme with the last number. So I think you would only have to rhyme with "3". If you want me to change that last verse, though, I will. __________________ "Do not forget to entertain strangers, for by doing some have unwittingly entertained angels." Dr. Wily is a registered trademark of Capcom, and I don't own the rights to it in anyway, nor do I profit from the avatar.

09-05-2008, 10:38 PM	#7
Deelicious PQL Visitor Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: IN Posts: 12	He reached down a hand to scratch his knee Instead of flesh, there was only air __________________

09-07-2008, 05:30 AM	#8
MO Pulse Communications Technician Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: In a tin can in the countryside Posts: 310	He looked at his leg and there was nothing there. He remembered reading about "phantom nerves." __________________ "What's left after you go is the good you've left behind." -- Robert Zubrin, American aerospace engineer

09-09-2008, 06:52 PM	#9
ohboy Junior Leaper Join Date: May 2008 Location: Northern California Posts: 1,383	"Oh no," said Sam. "This is not what I deserve!" "Al!" Sam cried. "Where are you?" __________________ "Do not forget to entertain strangers, for by doing some have unwittingly entertained angels." Dr. Wily is a registered trademark of Capcom, and I don't own the rights to it in anyway, nor do I profit from the avatar.

09-12-2008, 08:02 AM	#10
Jaycol Control Room Technician Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Newark, New York Posts: 147	"Right here Sam" said Al "I wonder that too" "Let me check with Ziggy, be back in a flash." __________________

09-12-2008, 12:30 PM	#11
Sam's Crow Assistant to Gooshie Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Liverpool, England Posts: 488	As Sam stood and waited, he heard a crash. He looked to see what it was and got a shock, There was a young bloodied woman at the bottom of the stairs. __________________ It's Monday morning again, Or still? It's hard to tell the difference.

09-12-2008, 01:06 PM	#12
Jaycol Control Room Technician Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Newark, New York Posts: 147	"My god it looks like she's been mauled by bears What can I do to get down to there. When my legs are nothing but air." O.K. One to many rhymes but that is what I came up with. __________________

09-13-2008, 08:27 PM	#13
ohboy Junior Leaper Join Date: May 2008 Location: Northern California Posts: 1,383	No, it sounded fun Jaycol. Like a violent Dr. Suess story. "Ohboy, that gave me quite a scare After what I saw down there." As Sam finished he could hear the baby laugh, Laugh like nothing in the world could go wrong. __________________ "Do not forget to entertain strangers, for by doing some have unwittingly entertained angels." Dr. Wily is a registered trademark of Capcom, and I don't own the rights to it in anyway, nor do I profit from the avatar.

09-14-2008, 01:04 PM	#14
Errowyn Observer's Aid Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: California Posts: 526	Can I join in? I've never tried a round robin like this before and am eager to try it out. My appologies if I mess anything up. It was as if the baby's heart was one big song. "How do I get down there?" Sam asked, "I need some luck." __________________ I was a sailor. I was born upon the tide and with the sea I did abide. I sailed a schooner round the Horn to Mexico I went aloft and furled the mainsail in a blow. And when the yards broke off they said that I got killed. But I am living still. --The Highway Man

09-14-2008, 06:03 PM	#15
ohboy Junior Leaper Join Date: May 2008 Location: Northern California Posts: 1,383	I'm not the creator of this thread, but I don't think that you messed up. By the way, you are always welcome to post on "Round Robin A" as well, in case you feel like it. Sorry for the cheap use of advertising on your thread, Crow... __________________ "Do not forget to entertain strangers, for by doing some have unwittingly entertained angels." Dr. Wily is a registered trademark of Capcom, and I don't own the rights to it in anyway, nor do I profit from the avatar.

10-06-2017, 12:06 AM	#16
MO Pulse Communications Technician Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: In a tin can in the countryside Posts: 310	"Because right now I'm kinda stuck. That young lady needs my aid," __________________ "What's left after you go is the good you've left behind." -- Robert Zubrin, American aerospace engineer

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